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Comment by Shawn Gibson on January 16, 2012 at 9:43pm
Thanks for the comments..yeah its a bit rough..but I'm hoping to improve it.
Comment by Brandon Ostwalt on January 16, 2012 at 3:34pm
Like the package thing but spend a bit more time on it and build a bigger transition into politics. Get more creative than a Titanic reference. Pick a current big mistake. Give comedic references to why Newt doesn't have a heart or why Mitt doesn't have a brain. I love the act outs! You may want to adjust your voice a bit more. It is really good and, when fine tuned, it is going to be GREAT. All of this is just suggestions so use your personal judgement.

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